- Mise en scene (interior) is excellent. Great attention to detail.
- Exterior shots are less effective- no real link to interiors. The lights do look good though.
- Stop motion worked very well- it is used to good effect.
- Lip syncing is good- a few lapses but that doesn't detract a great deal.
- Props are used with real skill.
- The cards with the lyrics on should have been used more often than once, this is a great idea.
- Towards the end of the track the drummer needs to hit the drums with more force.
- Nice touch at the end with the director entering the frame.
-Think about removing the skateboarding imagery.
-Do you have extra footage to fill the gaps.
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