After gathering all the information in from my class-mates and my teachers, i have decided to take a few actions to improve my overall grade.
Firstly, i am going to remove all of the skateboarding footage, as i now agree that there is no link between the band performance. Although my original idea resolved around the skateboarding, it is now central to the band performance and the mise-en-scene.
I will replace the skateboarding with footage including the band and the original room filled up with balloons! LETS SEE IF IT WORKS!!
Thanks to everyone for my feedback!!
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