Friday, 12 November 2010

Draft Feedback- Leonie

Love the shot underneath skateboard.
Lip syncing and instruments look really good.
Think it would be more effective if Jake didn't look at his mates when there is the mid shot of the four of them, but it still somehow works.
Costumes and setting work well.
Love the skating scenes.
Didn't know if i missed it, but when i watched it before i think there was a piece of paper that said 'love' on it before the shot of the graffiti 'love', i really liked that so keep it in!

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