Friday, 12 November 2010

Draft Feedback- Dan

  • Good lip syncing 
  • Looks like they're playing the instruments
  • Good, interesting shots of skateboarding
  • Good choice of costume
  • Good choice of actors
  • Mise en scene is just right
  • Good use of location
  • Needs a link between skateboarding and performance
  • Good use of one location
  • Skateboarding not really necessary, although its good

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